We were doing free choice writing and drawing a picture to go with our story. I got to use my imagination to create my story.
Once there were 2 kiwis and B.E the raptor which was friends with with a dragon called Amelia. Amelia has those 2 kiwis, Amelia and B.E. B.E asks Amelia “do you icecream from the shop?’. “Yes”, said Amelia. Then they bought and ate the icecream. Then they went to sleep. But there was evil in the world. The evil person or creature was Emaxa. He was really evil. He wanted to take over the world, but there were heroes. Beep, beep, beep it was time to get up, Amelia and have breakfast. But there was thumping and then a ka boom happened and more happened. B.E said Millie (Amelia for short) we have to get out of the house, B.E cried because he was panicking. They got out of the house, then the 2 kiwi’s were jumping up in the air because their home was on fire and there was Emaxus the evil person.
Chapter 2.
Whoosh, a portal came and sucked them in the portal. Crash, they crashed into Isla. Ouch, she cried. ‘Are you Ok?” Amelia said. “No”, Isla said. Aaaargh, Isla screamed and then she fainted. Then a nodding Amelia popped up from her desk. ‘Dragon!’ everyone started screaming, aaaargh! But Amelia just stood there. ‘I’m surprised’ she said and fainted. But first she said ‘Pretty unicorn’ Bump, she fainted. Then the 2 kiwis popped out of the portal. There were 20 children in the class. Oh-oh, Amelia said, but a special sword appeared. Everyone gasped. Then B.E and Amelia grabbed it and another portal appeared. “Let’s go”, Amelia said. “Yes” B.E said and they did. Whoosh! They returned home and there was Emaxus. “Ha, Ha, Ha, you can never stop me”. ‘Oh, can we’, said Amelia, ‘yes, oh, can we?” B.E said. “No, the sword of the universe”, Emaxus said. “Ok, I think that means the sword can defeat him”, Amelia said. “Yes, it must mean that” B.E said, so Amelia whooshed the universe sword. ‘Aaaargh”, poof, he disappeared. “Hooray”, everyone cheered, even the 2 kiwis. The End.
have to get out of the haas B.e cried. they get out of the haas then the 2 kiwi where Jumping up in the rye because there home was on fire and there was Emaxas the evil person. cd 2. wish! a Portal came and it sucker them in the portal. cash! they cast into Isla. ouch!. she clyde. are you ok?. Amelia said. no. Isla said. Aaaaaaaaa!!!. she screamed and then she fainted!. then a nade Amelia popped out of her desk. dragon!!!. eveoun started screaming aaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!. but Amelia just stood there. in surprising. She said. and fainted but first she said Pretty unicorn. bunk. she fainted. then the 2 kiwis popt out of the Portal .there Were 20 Children in the class. uo-no. Amelia said. but a special sword aped. everyone gust. then B.e and Amelia grab it and a nade portal appeared. las go. Amelia said. yes. B.e said. and they dead. wooos! and they returned home. and there wos Emaxas. hahaha! You can never stope me. oh can we. said Amelia. yes oh can we. B.e said. no the sword of universe. He said. ok i think that memes theat sword can defeat him. Amelia said. yes it must meme. B.e said. so Amelia woost the universe sword. aaaaaaaa!!. poof he disappeared. Hrye! eveoun cheers. Even the kiwis.the end.;/…!
